Hmm.. just something I drew last night. I had originally started off sketching a boy, but you know... it just turned into this. I like it, though. =< Based loosely on a classmate of mine.
There are a few notable mistakes where either my ball point pen bled on a line or the gel pens I was using got too clumpy. Other than that, I'd really appreciate it if somebody could point out other mistakes.
Let me know what you think!! Also, I need to come up with a name. xD --- Will just use said classmate's name.
Lol, I love her~ her hair reminds me of my char, hajime~
The mistakes aren't that bad, It's hard for me to pick them out but other than what you said, I think mabe some minor shading. other than that, nice work ^^
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"Talk not of wasted affection; Affection never was wasted."
Oh I forgot. and for a name, are you looking for a japanee name or a common name or what? If it's a more common one you're looking for, she looks like a delilah to me x3
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"Talk not of wasted affection; Affection never was wasted."
Hmm.. I looked through your gallery and can't seem to find Hajime. Have you uploaded a sketch of her? =0 She actually reminds me alot of a girl who was in my class last semester. She was really easy to draw, too. o 3o And yes! Point taken. I was wondering if I should shade it a little bit, but I've decided that I will attempt to colour it... Thanks for the comment!!
As for names, I don't really know.. Delilah seems kind of unoriginal since the Plain White T's song, but I'll think on it. Thanks alot. x3
kawaii desu~ :3 srsly so kyyyuuuuute x3 I love everything about this, her hair, her outfit, her glasses, purse, shoes, EVERYTHING. I can't even find a flaw to point out that i dislike.
if you go with a Japanese name, she seems to me someone like... Mika, But as far as English names, Delilah sounds good.
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The mistakes aren't that bad, It's hard for me to pick them out but other than what you said, I think mabe some minor shading. other than that, nice work ^^
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"Talk not of wasted affection; Affection never was wasted."
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"Talk not of wasted affection; Affection never was wasted."
She actually reminds me alot of a girl who was in my class last semester. She was really easy to draw, too. o 3o
And yes! Point taken. I was wondering if I should shade it a little bit, but I've decided that I will attempt to colour it... Thanks for the comment!!
As for names, I don't really know.. Delilah seems kind of unoriginal since the Plain White T's song, but I'll think on it. Thanks alot. x3
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I have submitted 2 pics of her, [link] and [link]
Good luck colouring it! I always ruin my pics with colour so I photocopy them beforehand.
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"Talk not of wasted affection; Affection never was wasted."
Thanks again! I was actually thinking of trying my hand at colouring it digitally.. we'll see, though.
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"Talk not of wasted affection; Affection never was wasted."
srsly so kyyyuuuuute x3
I love everything about this, her hair, her outfit, her glasses, purse, shoes, EVERYTHING.
I can't even find a flaw to point out that i dislike.
if you go with a Japanese name, she seems to me someone like... Mika,
But as far as English names, Delilah sounds good.
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If you cannot be a poet, be the poem~
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